Panel 1
Wide shot, boy sitting on the edge of a large rock, overlooking a smallish lake. Lots of trees and dense brush line the area. Small frogs and birds and bugs flit about the scene. The water is still, pristine.
N: I remember when I first fell in love.
N: I was just a boy then...
N: On vacation with my parents up at the lake.
Panel 2
The boy's POV looking down into the lake, his sad reflection stares back at us. He seems about to dive in.
N: I didn't have many friends back home...
N: Up there, I didn't have any.
Panel 3
A stone skips across the water sending ripples through his reflection and heads right towards him. He's startled and begins to slip from the rock.
Boy: Wha-? Whoa!
Panel 4
The boy falls in the water as the stone hits the rock. He's flailing about as he drops in headfirst.
Boy: Glug!
Page 2
Panel 1
The boy, soaking wet bobs out of the water.
Panel 2
The girl stands just across the small outcropping of the lake. She's smiling a devilish grin.
Panel 3
Boy meets girl
Panel 4
Girl hits boy
Page 3
Fireflies in jars
Page 4
Hitting frogs with sticks
Page 5
Throwing rocks at birds
Page 6
Build up to kiss
Page 7
Lil Sister interrupts and is killed
Page 8
Boy kills girl, kiss
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